Link to Pitch
I made a PowerPoint ready for the session. Below are the main issues that were raised and how I intend to solve them:
- Target Audience
I believe if I cut down on the blood and violence, and remove the scene of the dead King, I can keep the character designs as they are. This style, and the content, should hopefully look as though it is aimed at teenagers/ young adults.
- Rhys can't act as our Voice of God
We need to hire a more experienced actor, or professor of the subject, to narrate. I have emailed the Leeds University History Department and the Leeds Union History Society looking for more information. I have also emailed one of my lecturers, Dotty, as she has a background in acting.
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